Apprentice to a Breathing Hand by Laynie Browne

Book Excerpt: The Self-Combed Woman by Laynie Browne


A Self-Combed Woman

i.

Unpromised, with long braid down back
Kombid, cembam, unkept, combed
When married, her mother rolls plait up to affix
Self-combed women chose to coil their own
Hair signals oath: camb, crest, honey, kambaz
Abandoned red garments of bride
Steps over threshold, to needle and weft


ii.

As silk rose, they found ways to be rid of feudalistic

Kam, kamm, kambr, toothed, scribal carpets

The self-combed women lived together

Even fathers or brothers required permission to enter

Cotton pulled from worsted cloth, forbidden italic

If she changed her mind she would be drowned

Lathe, notched scale, curling wave, ransom

She cannot die in a relative’s home, nor be buried near

A homeless ghost, she may marry a dead man

Ghombhos, from gembh, bitten silvery presence


iii.

When silk fails she moves to Hong Kong or Macau

To Southeastern Seas, becomes a maidservant

Words recited with strokes of a comb—

First stroke, for luck, second for longevity

Outside the hall of ice and jade, men sought her

She implored them to depart, to make no demands

She fled poverty, forced betrothal, gamblers, opium addicts

Worked long hours, slept beside her machine

Connected and reduced curve, irreducible wood

She paid others to read aloud her letters

Recited from memory—aerial weaving comb, beautiful hand


iv.

Clandestine reading at night, in disguise

Abandoned false-bride plots

Search—rake over with comb

She adopts daughters in old age

Heraldic edging, voiced in gold letters

Female consciousness, her veiled body

Intrinsic muslin, handkerchiefs, blankets, bedding

Teeth intersect handle at a single point

Unequal to unique intersection of any other


About the Poem


Author Bio

Laynie Browne

Laynie Browne is a poet, prose writer, artist, editor and teacher. Her recent books of poetry include: Everyone & Her Resemblances (Pamenar, 2024), Intaglio Daughters (Ornithopter 2023), Practice Has No Sequel (Pamenar 2023), Letters Inscribed in Snow (Tinderbox 2023), and Translation of the Lilies Back into Lists (Wave Books, 2022). In 2024 a solo show of her collage titled “On the Way to the Filmic Woods” was exhibited at the Brodsky Gallery at Kelly Writer’s House. She co-edited the anthology I’ll Drown My Book: Conceptual Writing by Women (Les Figues Press) and edited the anthology A Forest on Many Stems: Essays on The Poet’s Novel (Nightboat). Honors include a Pew Fellowship, the National Poetry Series Award for her collection The Scented Fox, and the Contemporary Poetry Series Award for her collection Drawing of a Swan Before Memory. She teaches at the University of Pennsylvania.


From Apprentice to a Breathing Hand

The poetry of Laynie Browne’s Apprentice to a Breathing Hand explores alchemy, connectivity, and perception. Throughout the collection, Browne considers the formation and limits of personhood, the experience of a body moving through time, and the imperative to continually learn and unlearn. Browne looks to alchemy as a practice for cultivating the impossible, positioning it as a fitting model for our current moment. In the material of language, meaning must be unmade and remade endlessly, and in this continual regeneration, Browne considers the alchemy of how a poem can in turn transform the poet. Moving through methods of making and unmaking, the collection centers on the figure of an apprentice working in a space of indeterminacy, lack, breath, and constant shifting.

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Contents

Book Excerpt: Further Thought by Rae Armantrout

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Five Poems by A. L. Nielsen

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Chapbook Poem: The Poem as an Act of Betrayal by Benjamin S. Grossberg

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Jan. ‘25: Year One: What worked, what didn’t, and what to expect

Editor Aiden Hunt looks back at our first year and discusses changes to Philly Poetry Chapbook Review in 2025.

Three Poems by Shelli Rottschafer

Read three poems by poet Shelli Rottschafer, our second biweekly poet of the Winter 2025 issue, along with a few words about the poem “Because We Remember.”

Dancing With the Dead: On Ragnarök at the Father-Daughter Dance by Todd Dillard

“Todd Dillard successfully transgresses the unspoken cultural embargo on work that grapples with life during the COVID-19 pandemic in his new chapbook, Ragnarök at the Father-Daughter Dance.”

Three Poems by Wendell Hawken

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Book Excerpt: Slow Chalk by Elaine Equi

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Chapbook Poem: Caro M. by Angela Siew

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Four Poems by Natalie Marino

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A Conversation with Kate Colby

Poet Kate Colby discusses her latest chapbook, ThingKing, her creative writing practices, and her penchant for poetry chapbooks with PCR Editor Aiden Hunt in this interview piece.

Three Poems by Adele Ross

Read three poems by poet Adele Ross, our fifth biweekly poet of the Winter 2025 issue, along with a few words about the poem “Heavy Water”.

Book Excerpt: The Self-Combed Woman by Laynie Browne

Read the featured Excerpt Poem of the Month for March 2025, “The Self-Combed Woman” from Apprentice to a Breathing Hand by Laynie Browne, along with a few words from the poet.

Chapbook Poem: To Let Go by Deirdre Garr Johns

Read the featured Chapbook Poem of the Month for March 2025, “To Let Go” from Fallen Love by Deirdre Garr Johns, along with a few words from the poet.